2014年10月22日星期三


Epizeuxis --repeats one word for emphasis
                --that means “fastening together”. It is defined as a rhetorical device in which the                     words or phrases are repeated in a quick succession after each other for                               emphasis. 


Example1
           The amusement park was fun, fun, fun.
   

Example #2

    Alone, alone, all, all alone,
    Alone
     on a wide, wide room

    Example #3

     The Physics homework was so hard,hard, hard!


    Hyperbole--an exaggeration 
                    --is a figure of speech, make something bigger than it really it.
    Example1
    I'm so tired I could sleep for a year!

    Example2
    My backpack weighs a ton!

    Example3
    I'm so hunger I could eat a house!


2014年10月19日星期日

freedom writers


Topic1
     This talk about Erin Gruwell become a teacher after she graduate. This is her first job. She teach worst class in this school. She saw these students are isolated. She want found a idea to help them, but the students didn't like her. because Erin is white and she don't know their agony. So Erin need used doubled efforts merges with them. She want make a communicated with students to know their life. She found many way to tried. Before the students are really hate this teacher, but after a few days the students are accept Erin and they want talk with her. Then the students like went to school and study knowledge.

Topic 2
     This film show a big problem in the early American. The white people are distinguished with other color people. In a school the worst class students are isolated, because there most students from Africa America, Latin America, Asia, etc. They don't have same power with white. The school didn't granted give them new book to read. They divested those students to learn more knowledge. Then this class have a new teacher her name is Erin. This is her fist job. She want altered this problem. She approached those students and to know more about their life. She make a good communicated with students. Final she gained the trust of the students.

Topic 3
     At class Erin play a game with students. She make a line in the middle of classroom. And she will ask some questions, if they know this question,they need to stand on the line. Then she demonstrated how to play this game. All students participated this game. The students are really happy and no one rejected. Erin use this game to know students life. After this game she give each students a notebook. She want they wrote journal to narrated their life. Then she read it, and she know more things about the students. She know what them think about and the teach them how to be a good person. And she saw the students change. 
      
Topic 4
    Erin Gruwell is a novice teacher. Her first job is a school allocated her to teach a class that no one what to teach, it is worst class in this school. In this class the students have different color. They don't like school and white people. They come school but didn't studied anything. So Erin make a decided. She want aided them. This is a challenged for her. She want to know them life. Then she bought lots of notebook want them to wrote journal. She didn't grade them journal. If some students want her to read, they can put in a cabinet. Erin used journal to communicated with students. Final all students accept this novice teacher.

2014年10月6日星期一

Chimamanda Ngozi Adicle The danger of single story

Chimamanda Ngozi Adicle The danger of single story
  
    This women Chimamanda Ngozi Adicle is a novelist. she talk about our lives, our cultures, are composed of many overlapping stories. she tell us what her life. she born in a poor family, they life are so hard. So when she grow up she write the book about the her childhood. And what she think in her childhood. when she grow up she change some idea. because she doing more things. and she know more then when she are really young. this tell me people need learn more things every. we grow up everyday. and learn different things everyday.

water found on saturn's moon
      this talk about the Enceladus is the ocean of liquid water is on the moon. this ocean lies under a shell of ice. this ocean is large.the scientists learn about more information about obit saturn. they found more than 60 moons orbit saturn, many of them are covered with ice. . they found a vast ocean of liquid water. Scientistis made the discover using Cassini. Cassini is an unmanned spacecraft. 


2014年9月30日星期二

          This "Sunday night show about pretty pigments" is a show from American, it talk about women   have more respect today. Now women are different for before. They can went to a show and talk to everybody. This is hard thing on the before. And  the article "learning to love criterion" talk about in the world the women and men's different. The people found two differences between workplace performance reviews given to men and women. In the company gave female employees more negative feedback than they gave male. And the negative feedback given to women included some kind of personality criticism, such as comments that the women was "judgmental" or "strident". The people not really believe women. More people like to distrust and query to women. The women want get more respect. When have a women talk about something but have lots of people query and distrust his speaking, then she will fear and she will can't believe herself. Women today inhabit a transitional historical moment. We learning to respond to praise and criticism again. 

2014年9月26日星期五

                    In this summer vacation I back to China. It is really fun, I went to travel and back to my hometown. I eat the regular Chinese food. I miss them so much. Because in here have many Chinese restaurant ,but still have some different with the regular Chinese food. I tell to my mom, this things. My mom really wrong about me, so she teach me some easily to cook's Chinese food. I think cooking are really fun for me. I like to cooking. My mom teach how to make chicken wings, the beef, and the sheep. I like cooking to other, so in this summer vacation, I'm chef cook in my family. My parents said I'm genius, because my mom just need teach me one time, I already remember it. So when I back to America, I don't need always go to Chinese restaurant to eat Chinese food. I just can cook at home. So this things are rally help me.

2014年9月22日星期一

Hard times
     I think this article is logos, this article talk about in 1920 U.S. have strong economy, but on October 29,1929 they strong economy broke up. This year U.S. economy was very weak, they call the Great Depression. because many Americans buy things in credit,and many people went into debt. Then the companies need money, so they want bank to help them, but the bank don't have money to help them. So the companies let many worker go. At this time have many people lose their job. They don't have money. And then after a few years they make a new deal to help people get better. 

2014年9月18日星期四

                                                        Women who led  the way
1.Logos. Before women don't have same right with man, they want  get same right with men. So they make many speech for women's rights.
2. Ethos. Sojourner Truth is a Africa American women. She got own freedom. Then she lead women to get their own right.
3.Pathos. Women don't have their own right,and they can't vote. They don't have work just stay at home and take care their children. But they don't want life like this , they want more power.